This was a descriptive poem that was supposed to include all five senses. We did these based of a picture and the person who was read our poem was supposed to try to find the picture. I doubt anyone was able to get the correct picture but I would've gone back and included some more description next time around.
People see me as unhappy
But I do not live badly
My cinnamon skin
Has not been made thin
The cool fall breeze
does not chill me
Your stinging comments do not faze
I, myself, live in an innocent daze.
The smell and rustle
of a palm trees bustle
Are what show me delight
in the dead of the night
The feeling of cool bamboo floors
Have often held the cure
for my small tired feet
and soothe me into peaceful sleep
You way call me unhappy
But I'm still carefree, after all,
A tiger does not lose sleep
Over the opinion of sheep.
This was beautiful!
ReplyDeleteOne of my favs! atta girl
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